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Old World (public) => Poems => Topic started by: Abba Rabidar on November 05, 2006, 09:58:47 PM

Title: Echoes
Post by: Abba Rabidar on November 05, 2006, 09:58:47 PM

thought and reality, ever united
an imperceptible line becomes undivided
echoes of the mind, ring out into existence
a world falls behind without resistense
as doubts fall away, coincidence diminishes
and growing in intensity, the dim voice becomes
a manifesting game of leap frog that's begun
disinigrating time, leaves rationality behind
and it sure is fun
to lose your mind

Title: Re: Echoes
Post by: Wind Child on November 16, 2006, 12:02:11 AM

I see you made some changes Abba.
I like this new version.  ;D
 :-*
Very much!

Title: Re: Echoes
Post by: niamh04 on November 16, 2006, 12:16:34 AM

Very nice Abba - I like it! :)

Title: Re: Echoes
Post by: afix^ on November 16, 2006, 02:28:29 AM

well done abba..

you'll have them feeding out of your hand in no time..

har
har
har

Title: Re: Echoes
Post by: Wind Child on November 16, 2006, 10:56:34 AM

Quote from: afix^ on November 16, 2006, 02:28:29 AM

well done abba..

you'll have them feeding out of your hand in no time..

har
har
har

Maybe we already are
 ::)