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Ke-ke wan

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red
« on: August 03, 2015, 04:15:51 AM »
Your naked body
in the mirror
a double-edged reflection
re-flecting
Two of you
(Perhaps more
the deeper I look)
One high, one low
One up and one down
one protecting me
With strong solid arms
and one i had to run from
long, dark hallways in slow-mo
one keeping me safe
As I slept every night
And
One holding the knife
and slicing
body, and my heart
warm blood oozes
Squishy in my shoe
red jelly clots
on the
dirty
carpet
« Last Edit: August 03, 2015, 09:40:30 AM by Lori-Ann »

Offline Nichi

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Re: red
« Reply #1 on: August 03, 2015, 04:52:34 AM »
Awesome!
Not here, not there, but everywhere - always right before your eyes.
~Hsin Hsin Ming

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Re: red
« Reply #2 on: August 03, 2015, 04:56:15 AM »
Just this morning, M said...

We are red because our egos glow with fire - we don't belong anywhere.
Not here, not there, but everywhere - always right before your eyes.
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Ke-ke wan

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Re: red
« Reply #3 on: August 03, 2015, 07:01:39 AM »
Just this morning, M said...

O, I am not surprised.  I  nearly used the word 'fire' in this poem.  On second thought, I Deleted it, though. 


"We are red because our egos glow with fire - we don't belong anywhere."

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Re: red
« Reply #4 on: August 03, 2015, 08:15:51 AM »
Good job and welcome back!
"A warrior doesn't seek anything for his solace, nor can he possibly leave anything to chance. A warrior actually affects the outcome of events by the force of his awareness and his unbending intent." - don Juan

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Re: red
« Reply #5 on: August 03, 2015, 11:23:41 PM »
Red for luck

 


 

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